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Gawain Project: Brothers & Sisters, p. 135

"We Made It" illustration: check.
Bookmark for Bookdepository: check.
Page 135: check - but only just. I apologise for the late posting hour and the hasty and less-than-stellar art (but would you believe I have recently had some equally hasty published work in my hands? That's no excuse for my own hasty stuff, but really...! *shakes head*). As it is, I'm happy I got to post at all...
I still need sleep. Which you can tell by the totally unintended innuendo in some of the stuff below :P.
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A runaway slave boy begs Arthur to save his family from their Saxon masters. Cei doesn't trust the boy, but Arthur feels inspired. He decides to ride for Venta. And there he is going to do something everybody could have predicted. Some other people are going to try first though.

Concrit is still and always welcome :).
THE STORY SO FAR:
Part I: The Darkest Hour
1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-21, 22-24, 25-27, 28-31, 32-35, 36-40, 41-44, 45-47, 48-50, 51-53, 54-57, 58-60, 61-64, 65-66, 67-69, 70-73, 74-75, 76-81, 82-84, 85-87, 88-90, 91-92, 93-97, 98-101, 102-103, 104-108, 109-111, 112-114, 115-119
Interlude: The Sword of Kings
1-4, 5-11
Part II: Sunrise
Brothers and Sisters
1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-21, 22-24, 25-27, 28-30,31-33, 34-36, 37-39, 40-42, 43-45, 46-48, 49-51, 52-54, 55-57, 58-60, 61-63, 64-66, 67-69, 70-72, 73-75, 76-78, 79-81, 81, 82, 83, 84, 85, 86, 87, 88, 89, 90, 91, 92, 93, 94, 95, 96, 97, 98, 99, 100, 101, 102, 103, 104, 105, 106, 107, 108, 109, 110, 111, 112, 113, 114, 115, 116, 117, 118, 119, 120, 121, 122, 123, 124, 125, 126, 127, 128, 129, 130, 131, 132, 133, 134.
sword
Who are the Brothers trying to take the sword? And why don't they let their leader try first?
(And who are going to release the prisoner in the cellar?)
Re: sword
As for the twins, they are Balin and Balan; they got named a few pages ago (129). If ever you get to read this whole thing in a more fluent way than blog post after blog post, things like names will be a LOT easier, I think :D...
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And I notice a particular design for Excalibur - have you invented it or is it a reference to something?
(Re: Published works today, let's cover this topic with a piteous veil...)
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The sword design is based on the sword of the Lord of Oss (http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Verbogen_Keltische_zwaard.jpg). I saw it, as well as a modern replica, at an exhibition and thought it was a stunning blade :D...
Yes, swords. It's not my fault if they tend to stick out at odd angles. I try to keep it decent, but... ;)
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[ctd. in my reply to Cecilia below :)]
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So: this sword was ritually 'killed' so that its ghost might be used by its master in the Otherworld - but many more have been found in pools, lakes and rivers, in which they seem to have been thrown by way of offering or sacrifice. (There are MASSES of them in La Tène, but they are found all over the Celtic territory.)
And the good bit: it is believed that the idea of Excalibur as the sword that has to be returned to a lake has its origins in this practice :).
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I must confess, I was completely baffled by the prison scenes, though I admired them very much. Who were those people?
Sorry for all the questions! I am enjoying this story very much.
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The twins I can do though: they are Balin and Balan (=> p. 129, I threw the names in but it doesn't seem like they stuck - Anna on DW was also asking who they are... It's not easy to get everyone properly named while avoiding the characters addressing each other by name all the time in a most unrealistic way XD.)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I had such a hard time getting Arthur right, but now I'm enjoying writing him very much.