Gawain Project: Brothers & Sisters, 28-30

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It's been a while, so I hope you haven't forgotten all about Gawain :-). Me, I have been thinking about him for much of the time, struggling to straighten out my plot, which is always a tricky thing for me. I have no trouble inventing characters or dialogue, but plot? Oh boy. I think I have it ironed out now. I have no doubt that there may be occasional snags as I work my way from one point to another, but I'll tackle those when I meet them. I know from working on The Darkest Hour that the actual writing and drawing of a story brings much more to it than I initially imagined.

In any case, we're off again, no doubt for a few hundred pages...

I know this story takes off rather slowly, but if you could see my outline, you'd see it contains more dramatic events than TDH twice over :p. So - soonish, okay? Please bear with me for the time being :-).

Concrit = welcome, as always.

What went before
King Lot has brought his eldest son, Gawain, to the convent of the Valley of No Return, where the child is to be taught by Morgana and her nuns. Morgana clearly has plans for the boy - but whether or not they coincide with Lot's remains to be seen.

Sunrise Chapter 1: Brothers and Sisters
Brothers and Sisters 1-3, Brothers and Sisters 4-6, Brothers and Sisters 7-9, Brothers and Sisters 10-12, Brothers and Sisters 13-15, Brothers and Sisters 16-18, Brothers and Sisters 19-21, Brothers and Sisters 22-24, Brothers and Sisters 25-27










Next week: Gawain meets a mysterious boy in the woods.

Comments

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Gawain looks older and taller now. How long has he been living with the nuns at this point?

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Hum, yes, I know my timeline is a bit sketchy. I'm refusing to calculate everything because - well, I'd end up with a nearly 1000-year-old Gawain eventually, so time is a bit fluid. But at this point in the story Gawain is around 10 years old.

If you think Vague Timeline hinders the reading, let me know!