Art help...

Is there someone on my flist willing to beta a picture for me? I would be very grateful for your help. I would post it at artbeta, but the problem is that it is a picture for an exchange (my very first)... The drawing (rated G, of course) is probably the most complex composition I have done yet, and it's a gift for another artist, so I would feel much better if someone would have a look at the sketch and offer corrections.

Any takers?

Pretty please?

*Bambi eyes*


ETA: My Bambi eyes have done their job ;-).

Thanks to all who offered help! I'll be sending the sketch along as soon as it's scanned...