In my personal experience, when you try to "correct" a page made in sketchy version (let's call it that way, although it isn't particularly sketchy; but you know what I mean) the result is often unsuccessful, because what makes the sketchy pages so charming is exactly the spontaneousness of it. When you start to think too much about it, you become self-conscious and the page becomes stilted. So I don't think your teacher - especially if he likes the pages so much - would actually correct them, but he can make suggestion about how to draw a new page better.
For example, I consider this page finished enough (and I especially like panels 2 and 4! I think the depth is quite well-shown!) but let's say there are other pages in which some elements could have been drawn better: in that case, is not so much a matter of correcting the existing pages, but of drawing them again (sometimes) giving more care to those elements that didn't work.
I am in a phase in which I particularly like my layouts better than my finished pages (as I usually do, but now in particular!) so I feel this matter deeply. When I do very detailed layouts, they could work as a page by themselves, so I'm usually disappointed with the polished version (it lacks the vivacity and immediacy of the layouts. So one solution could be to make sketchier layouts - or to make even more detailed layouts that could actually be used as finished pages. I'm still thinking about this.
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Date: Monday, 8 June 2015 07:43 am (UTC)For example, I consider this page finished enough (and I especially like panels 2 and 4! I think the depth is quite well-shown!) but let's say there are other pages in which some elements could have been drawn better: in that case, is not so much a matter of correcting the existing pages, but of drawing them again (sometimes) giving more care to those elements that didn't work.
I am in a phase in which I particularly like my layouts better than my finished pages (as I usually do, but now in particular!) so I feel this matter deeply. When I do very detailed layouts, they could work as a page by themselves, so I'm usually disappointed with the polished version (it lacks the vivacity and immediacy of the layouts. So one solution could be to make sketchier layouts - or to make even more detailed layouts that could actually be used as finished pages. I'm still thinking about this.