No matter what you may say, the premises for slash are all there! Gawain is defending him! Against his own brother! He's fighting for him! If this is not love... ;)
A-hem.
I love Gawain's narrowed eyes at the top of page 36. Love them. You nailed his expression perfectly. On the other hand, I disagree with the up-to-down focus point in the very last panel - I think it deducts the sense of aggression. I'd rather have a down-to-top POV, so that the reader would appreciate more the movement of Gawain's leg.
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Date: Saturday, 16 April 2011 09:21 pm (UTC)A-hem.
I love Gawain's narrowed eyes at the top of page 36. Love them. You nailed his expression perfectly.
On the other hand, I disagree with the up-to-down focus point in the very last panel - I think it deducts the sense of aggression. I'd rather have a down-to-top POV, so that the reader would appreciate more the movement of Gawain's leg.