I am following your progress with great interest ;)...
The trouble with my attempts at "show, don't tell" is that I need to introduce lots of characters before they get really important. But that means my poor reader is supposed to remember whom they met at which point :/. This is all right when you can read the entire story at a reasonable pace, but it gets very hard if you are reading a webcomic as it gets posted. On the comic's own website, I will have a character list that readers can consult.
You will let me know if things are/get confusing, won't you?
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Date: Sunday, 27 January 2013 08:05 pm (UTC)The trouble with my attempts at "show, don't tell" is that I need to introduce lots of characters before they get really important. But that means my poor reader is supposed to remember whom they met at which point :/. This is all right when you can read the entire story at a reasonable pace, but it gets very hard if you are reading a webcomic as it gets posted. On the comic's own website, I will have a character list that readers can consult.
You will let me know if things are/get confusing, won't you?
Thank you for reading *hugs*!