I know, page 29 is particularly clumsy. I hadn't found my 'swing' yet. Apart from showing Morgana at full height in the first panel, I should also show the interior of her cell, to situate the page. There's a gap in time between pages 28 and 29 - 28 is just a bridge.
Actually, the nuns on page 28 are not Morgana. There are eight others sisters in the convent, each specialising in something - there's one who is a brehon, there's one who is a bard, one who is a warrior... But they haven't got names and faces yet, apart from Conchobarre, so they all get mixed up until then.
Hum. Since I need to rethink pages 25-27, I'm thinking I might add a proper introduction of the nuns, because I may not get round to that later.
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Date: Sunday, 3 April 2011 10:49 am (UTC)Actually, the nuns on page 28 are not Morgana. There are eight others sisters in the convent, each specialising in something - there's one who is a brehon, there's one who is a bard, one who is a warrior... But they haven't got names and faces yet, apart from Conchobarre, so they all get mixed up until then.
Hum. Since I need to rethink pages 25-27, I'm thinking I might add a proper introduction of the nuns, because I may not get round to that later.
Thanks!