It looks really good. To be honest it looks so good that I as a reader can read it like normal comic without considering this as sketches from planning stages. Red and black give nice effect.

I like how you portray the heroes, especially young Gawain. I know him only from Arthurian legends. I'm curious how you version will look, remembering your great Snape comic.

Do you plan to make the comic like the one with Snape in black and white or use the red as well?