I am following your progress with great interest ;)...

The trouble with my attempts at "show, don't tell" is that I need to introduce lots of characters before they get really important. But that means my poor reader is supposed to remember whom they met at which point :/. This is all right when you can read the entire story at a reasonable pace, but it gets very hard if you are reading a webcomic as it gets posted. On the comic's own website, I will have a character list that readers can consult.

You will let me know if things are/get confusing, won't you?

Thank you for reading *hugs*!